Dove and Crow Video

Original videos

The crow:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AyPcLqBrmnc
The Dove:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kkSSmg_VMoQ

Poem:"Dove and Crow"

watchful angels must often see, what is not to be seen
In the eyes of crows, and doves mysteries

The Dove it's nature not harsh or cold
But stoic fit to eyes that truth truly knows
the crow it's fleeting farce of mis-educated claim
facsimile of ferocious facilitation of misbegotten gain

They fly both, close and wing to wing
Neither Knows enough of silence to softly sing

Instead the crow squawks
and the dove just elevates his wings

They fly to purge the night of moon, both climbing high
with hopes to rapture closing tune,

knowing full well the song to sing would be the one to birth the day
they fly wing to wing not knowing what to say

But one the dove does fly to heights of heaven where the crow does fear to go
Because though that crow does think does dream does squawk but does not know how to sing

he sings,

slow and solid resolute in breadth and wing

Calls the crow back, Squawk, Dove do you not sing?

The dove replies, in starlit sky

But crow, i refuse to say if soliloquy can bring about this day
i must know for sure For fear if the moon loves my voice, it will surely stay

Squawks the crow, but dove,
Do you not know the suns immortal love?
Who are you to say your song of loving truth is not what breaks the midnights noose
I am far more bold and clean than you, so I sing this midnight tune

They climb as fire climbs to the walls of man or gods design
silent is the dove, as the crow bleeds for the sun to shine

Squawk, the crow pleads over and over and out of breath at times
the dove breathes in, and slowly from wing to wing is ahead in time

The crow says dove, do you hate me for beating you in tune
For you break pace and push further towards the moon
I have squawked and squealed and prayed and kneeled
and still the sun comes not, as night will never yield

the dove shouts back, from miles advanced
cooing in beautiful pitch

Into the sweet night air, his solemn voice is stitched

i do not hate You crow, for believing that which you do not know
But If you thought before you squawked, you'd have seen it in the midnight glow

I do not know what i cannot know, or sing before i know the words
I simply listened and slowly knew what i must learn
as we flew though broken dew and twisted night, as brothers side by side
i quickly soared from your wing as this night slowly died

You see our song cannot coax or kill the moon from night
Because further i have flown, And closer is the moon in sight
Now i know this stone embedded in this blanket holding stars
is nothing but an eye which must slowly close and is much too far

for crows and doves to go,

You see it falls as we reach it's peak
The night is lighter now, We do not need to reach
Crow squawk no more
and let the learned teach

The crow too far behind to hear the words of doves design
kept climbing and climbing as the dove retreats, lowering as the moon slowly dies

the crow alone squawking still, singing songs in cold nights chill

freezes

and falls

and let this be a lesson to us all

Those who do not know and speak, and say bolder that they are more
Will feel the earth's cold floor no matter what heights they reach

this tragedy, of dove and crow

Rest in ignorance the crow, may the dove feel suns warm glow

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Link10893: I sense poem wars in the future.

SomeDudeThatRants: Hmm....................Most interesting.

Tommerman89: like what, 4 hours of work? Shit man I'm working with pen caps and you got caligraphy. Amazing to say the least.

TehChillinJuggalo: loved the poem man beautiful tune that would make :]

KnivesMonroe: Well you've done it.

Inanuttshell: Very nice :)

Rithrandil: I like it.

edenscancer: @Tommerman89 lol, i was inspired by your stuff man, They're both calligraphy, just different styles. Took about 30 minutes i think. Either way i'd love to see a lot more poetry from other users spring from the three of us.

VitaVeritasVictoria: I was thinking of reciting my poetry. Actually been pondering the idea for quite some time but have been afraid. You've given a boost here and I thank you for that! This was AMAZING to say the very least! Your voice is equally as amazing. Will you do more?

edenscancer: @VitaVeritasVictoria I'm so glad that this gave you inspiration to put out your own work, there is no greater compliment than to be part of inspiring someone to create something beautiful. Thank you so much for the kind words about the piece, When i read poetry I still feel strange getting compliments lol. I will be doing more, and soon because knives responded to mine. Also i will be uploading more poetry outside this battle, because of the positive response this has gotten. Thank you :)

FallenAngelKyo: Great piece man.

rozeboosje: great

rozeboosje: Poetry battle? What's this about a poetry battle?

VitaVeritasVictoria: Yes! You absolutely have given me inspiration. I must admit I've been a bit down lately and so I sort of got a brain fog going on. But this , your piece of artwork, gave me the chills and I knew I had to pull myself out of it. So really, I owe you my gratitude for helping me in this way. I look foward to more of your work, I especially loved the Kassiedildo vids..lol

edenscancer: I may or may not have sounded the alarm a little early lol, Feel free to post responses in poetry form Either agreeing or disagreeing of my stance. You can also post the reply to tommerman89, or knivesmonroe, the other two who have posted poems. Only stipulation is it can just be poetry, or song.

rozeboosje: disagreeing? Hardly :P

Author: edenscancer; Uploaded: Nov 8, 2009; Duration: 4:0; Views: 236

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